Some people argue that the fittest, strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is as much related to mental attitude.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many people hold the belief that strongest athletes are more capable to be a success in sports; however, others argue that mental attitude plays an important role in prosperity. To illustrate, both sides will be discussed and finally give my own view of this issue.
Firstly, a group of people think that having strong muscles and fit shape of the body is more susceptible to be the success in sports fields. For example, some sportsman, in individual sports such as wrestle and weight lifting, who are more fit and stronger probably have more opportunities to win a game and achieve success in their field. In other words, these specifications are prerequisite to taking the first step toward successfulness. Thus, it seems that in this kind of sports, in order to achieve the greatest success having a strong body, is essential.
However, other groups hold that mental attitude is key to achieving success in sports. Some sports such as football and basketball require so many focus as well as stability which are part of mental issues. Based on research that has been conducted by the University of Tehran, statistics show that having a positive mental attitude increase athletes’ concentration and stability leads to having a better group working. So, many experts and I advocate this view and believe that mental attitude is an essential part of both individual and group sports; however, it impacts the group ones in large scale for achieving more success.
In conclusion, it is argued that those sportsmen who are stronger and fittest are more prone to be a success in sports. While many people think that mental attitude is more attributed to successful. This essay discussed both sides and presented that mental attitude is more important than a strong body in this case.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun focus seems to be countable; consider using: 'many foci', 'many focuses', 'many focusses'.
Suggestion: many foci; many focuses; many focusses
...h as football and basketball require so many focus as well as stability which are part of ...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e more prone to be a success in sports. While many people think that mental attitude ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04362416107 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72874095619 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503355704698 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3781214331 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312604531778 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120145644268 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615535689551 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203001561066 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298506827636 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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