Some people argue that holding sporting events is beneficial to countries' development. However, other people hold the opposite opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Few countries organize mega sports events some people argue That it is beneficial to the country and it leads to the overall development of the country while others think that It is just a waste of time and money.The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, For organizing sports events at the international level like the Olympic or cricket world cup, countries need to invest lots of money.For sports events, they need to set up the ground for each sports event.People from different countries visit the host country at That time so it increases tourism. organizing countries also need to take care of hotel stay as well as medical services for each player.for each sports government needs to buy state of the art sports equipment for each and the individual player.it increases the tax on normal people. For example in the year 2011 India has invested around 800 crores in the Olympics and it has increased the tax on normal people so the price of things that we used in daily life has increased.
On the other hand,it will improve the overall basic structure of the city where the events are being organized.it will create employment in both direct as well as indirect ways.it also encourages tourism. the host country also earns well by selling tickets. Arranging such events boosts the economic development of the host country.
To sum up , organizing events at an international level requires a huge amount of money ,They benefit the host country in both political and economic ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, for example, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89272030651 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5892973363 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.8601606031 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.625 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.625 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196244582224 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900720500874 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733634940735 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131809614222 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794989598529 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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