Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the attitude towards employment has undergone a noticeable and far-reaching transformation. Under this circumstance, the vehement discussion had been occurred that debate the important in life between job satisfaction and emolument. This essay will give an insight into the situation and provide my personal perspective.
On the one hand, some people hold the belief that having happiness is of great paramount in job. Firstly, working in comfortable is a comparative motivation for people to improve their knowledge and their skills. It will make workers to become an expert in their field and create overate innovations to the development of organizations. Secondly, the pleasant job had impact of human’s liability. All jobs requires employees to be responsibility for their actions, such as doctor might be had thoroughness to take care of patient.
On the other hand, others argue that nice remuneration is also a crucial factor for myriad employees in life. The first reason is having a generous salary help worker afford the increasing highly living expenses. It is more comfortable to pay daily expense such as housing, telephone and petrol that create highly life’s pressure in independent survival. Another reason is the connecting wealth and material possessions with happiness and success. They claim that satisfying wages might be support them to enjoy the convenient which described the life of succeed person such as living in a smart houses and relaxing in luxury resort.
To conclude, there are strong argument for satisfactory job and good emolument. Nevertheless, I maintain my original position that having exiting in job is more necessary than nice salary. If we want to improve the best wage then promoting experience, talent and responsibility are the best option.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: require
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03165367364 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8137879322 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19103619476 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536118816907 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418780598856 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100208377992 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00909374630596 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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