Some people become famous at a very young age. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
We live in an age when contemporary standards allow people to obtain fame at an early age. fame at mature can bring about remarkable benefits but there are still some drawbacks to consider. In this paper, both sides will be thoroughly discussed.
On the one hand, becoming famous at such young age can have some important advantages. when the young become famous, they will be recognized locally and globally wherever they go. this is a great ego boost that will make them become more self-confident and self-esteem, as a result, they can perform well in public. In addition, whenever it is career-related or not, many different opportunities arise when teenagers become famous. Youngsters can get special treatment in almost every place they go and many famous brands will hire them to advertise their products. Moreover, being well-known at an early age would be beneficial in terms of independence because research conducted by pedagogical experts at the Canadian ministry of education in 2019 revealed that famous young people are more expected to be independent by 50%.
On the other hand, having fame at a young still has some disadvantages. people who became famous too early in their life often got affected in negative ways in the future. A celebrity lifestyle comes with the stress of the celebrity press, threatening letters or calls, no privacy, and constant monitoring of their lives.. Once they become celebrities, their personal life will be published by the media and they need to please their family, friends as well as the outside world, and their fans. when they fail to live up to these expectations, social media turns into a platform where celebrities are bullied and assaulted. Practically no one is ever ready for the limelight, and kids who are young and haven’t experienced much of life are definitely not ready. this can also lead to suicidal thoughts.
In conclusion, although being well known at an early age have many merits such as being richer, getting special treatment,.. popularity can break young people life and make it worse.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06744868035 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79303306512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6489217617 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276850230798 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926967263927 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740709258943 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174981404247 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061307892416 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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