Some people beleive that air travel shoud be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world's fuel resources.to what extent do u agree or disagree?
Technology has blessed us many transport facilities such as airways,waterways,roadways and railways which enhance the lifestyle of people. Presently,it is argued that air transport should be banned it produce contamination and reduce in the word's fuel resources which affects in the balance of environment. Here,i would like to accord with this statement.
Multifarious points about the negative affects of air travel. Firstly,all the aircrafts run on ATP and produce carbon and other gases in the sky in the form of smoke. Thus,this emission contributes to global warming which is serious concern...
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air transport should be banned it produce contamination and reduce in the word's fuel resources
air transport should be banned as it produces contamination and reduces the word's fuel resources
Multifarious points about the negative affects of air travel.
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which is serious concern for the world
which is the serious concern for the world
plane consume large quantities of oil
planes consume large quantities of oil
which can be hazardous consequences.
which can be hazardous in consequences.
pollution is the another factor who reduce air travel.
pollution is the another factor which reduces air travel.
it produce lots of noise which not only harmful to animals
it produces lots of noise which is not only harmful to animals
Air travel provide empoyment oppurtunities
Air travel provides empoyment oppurtunities
most of industries and economy are rely on air travel
most of industries and economy rely on air travel
Sentence: Secondly,exessive utilization of oil is also responsible to reduce air travel.
Error: exessive Suggestion: excessive
Sentence: Finally,maximum space required for the airports because the number of flights are inreasing day by day and therefore many forests are cut for their establishment.
Error: inreasing Suggestion: increasing
Sentence: Initially,in this jet age of 21st century,air travel is almost essential.Air travel provide empoyment oppurtunities to the people.
Error: empoyment Suggestion: employment
Error: oppurtunities Suggestion: opportunities
Sentence: Moreover,most of industries and economy are rely on air travel,if it is completely restricted the economy growth of whole world wlii be inhibited.Thus; the country will not developed properly.
Error: wlii Suggestion: will
Sentence: However,non-essential flights like those of tourists,leisure sources shoud be restricted.
Error: shoud Suggestion: should
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