Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices in everyday matters is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some, that children to make their own choices on everything is not good for society. Everyone thinks about their own. Whereas, others think the opposite. This essay intends to discuss both viewpoints. In my opinion, I personally have of the latter view. When children make their own decision about every signal things it will be helpful for their future.
There are many reasons why some people say that when children make every decision it affects society. Firstly, when children have all freedom that time they do not have an idea about what is good for them or what are not? Somehow, they are aware of it so they only think about themself. It directly affects society. After some time childer are not taken apart in social events. It is affected them in better development. Secondly, sometimes children are habitual for their own behaviour they always think about the individual, even tho they do not know about that value and importance for the families.
On the other hand, who says that children make decisions for their own that affect them, give their reasons as follows. To begin with, children take their own decisions so it is succoured them for the self-confidence. They have an idea about the value of things. Apart from them, in future, that confidence stimulates the child for better meant. That time they can make every decision in their whole life, so it is beneficial for every child who takes their decision from childhood. In that time they learn many things. Whenever they phase some difficulty that time their mentors are there to correct it and give some knowledge, which are helpful in future.
In recapitulation, children make their own decision it affects society. I believe that it depends on the children nature and nurture. Moreover, when they commenced taking their own decisions from childhood they have a better experience among others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44575661226 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468553459119 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1950819439 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.347826087 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8260869565 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438132070656 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141891933189 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128587838527 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319671296287 0.151304729494 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787950581806 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.78 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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