Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some societies opine that kids can be a person of individuals who only think about their self hopes due to they not include other people. But some citizens think that it is neccesary for kids to make deliberations about matters that influent them. I believe that children can be problem solver if they make decisions alone.
Children can be a citizen of personals who only think about their interests due to they not include other people in making decisions, it will make them can be attain their hopes without disturbed by other people interests. This is because parents never refuse their children hopes. For example, children can cry if their parents not fulfill their ambitions, it make their parent urged to grant the children hopes. Continueously, they can hurt other people.
In other hand, it is neccesary for kids to make deliberations about matters that influent due to they can be a problem solver, it will make they can more creative, futhermore they can survive in some conditions in the future. That is to say, kids get used to face the result of their decisions, they used to know how the merits and demerits of their deliberations. Take student in elemntary school as an example. When student experience a problem in school, teacher suggests them to make some decisions alone, it enhances the student ability to answer the various of questions.
In conclusion, children can be an individualist who only think about their self hopes due to they not involve other citizens. But some societies think that it is neccesary for kids to make deliberations about somethings that affect them. I believe that children can be problem solver if they make decisions alone. Wherea possible, parents have to usual their children to make some decisions to traine them to solve their problem. Hence, they can survive in many conditions.
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- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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...if they make decisions alone. Children can be a citizen of personals who only t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95792880259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62152702328 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411003236246 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4791275504 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288295697954 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117585537315 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745759330086 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223699706696 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640056361024 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.