some people believe that allowing children to make their on choice on everyday matter is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. other people believe that it is important for children tomake decision about matters that affect them.
discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Growing the children is an important issues for parents. Hugs of allowing in making choices has many result in children future. In this essay will discuss the effect of the ability for choosing the thing, which parent allow children’s.
Some people insist on view that allowing children to make their own choices on every day make them a people who think about their own wishes. From this view if we think deeper maybe it is better to say this ideas convert the children as people who have self-confidence and self-assurance. Because of putting their needs first, they learn to be on the top of the attention. If we have to look at this positive effects this view case a children who can grow base on their own ideas and in the future can act in true way.
In other hand, some people has opposite idea. They think that it is important to make decision on things which affect them. By this idea we can grow children who has self-confidence but not completely. They just are perfect in such field which has abilities. For example if they had chosen food in the past, nowadays still have abilities in it and do it in best way. In opposite is correct, if in such fields parents stopped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions.
Finally, in my idea the best way for bring up babies is to give abilities to make decisions in all matter until they don’t hurt himself. This idea do not give them limit which effect to their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
... Growing the children is an important issues for parents. Hugs of allowing in making...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... think deeper maybe it is better to say this ideas convert the children as people wh...
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Line 4, column 432, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...at this positive effects this view case a children who can grow base on their own ideas an...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ys still have abilities in it and do it in best way. In opposite is correct, if in such...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...rents stopped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisio...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...pped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions. Fin...
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Line 5, column 460, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...pped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions. Fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, so, still, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65137614679 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48016568777 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470948012232 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5979102455 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72222222222 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489115125418 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161048401539 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.184358762918 0.0667982634062 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295450745913 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.231124725864 0.056905535591 406% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.