Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Growing children is an important issues for parents. Gives hugs of allowing to make choices has many results in children futures. In this essay will discuss effects of the ability for choosing things, which parent are allow to children.
Some people insist on view that allowing children to make their own choices make them a people who think about their own wishes. From this view if we think deeper, maybe it is better to say, this view convert children as people who have self-confidence and self-assurance. Because they are put their needs in the first level, so they believe all time they should be on the top of the attention. If we have to look at this positive effects this view case a children who can grow base on their own ideas and in the future can act in true way. For example this kind of childes can get future conclusion for knowing needs.
In other hand, some people has opposite idea. They think that it is important to make decision on things which affect them. By this idea parents are grow children who has self-confidence but not completely. Because they have not ground to make their decision for issues so they just are perfect in such fields which has abilities. For example if they had chosen food in the past, nowadays still they have abilities in it and do it in best way. In opposite it is correct, if in such fields parents stopped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions.
Finally, in my idea the best way for bring up babies is to give abilities to make decisions in all matter until they don’t hurt himself. This idea do not give them limit which effect to their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'issue'?
Suggestion: issue
Growing children is an important issues for parents. Gives hugs of allowing to ...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...ues for parents. Gives hugs of allowing to make choices has many results in children fu...
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Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...at this positive effects this view case a children who can grow base on their own ideas an...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ill they have abilities in it and do it in best way. In opposite it is correct, if in s...
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Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...rents stopped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisio...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...pped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions. Fin...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...pped themes, in adult age they does not has self-confidence to make decisions. Fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, so, still, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57432432432 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41290018235 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496621621622 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3474786498 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274036092614 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100277614972 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11342591815 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155849445661 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829445543329 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.