Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people insist on this view, sharing information as possible in scientific research should not be freely, other one has opposite views. this essay will discusses both view as follows.
Firstly, Not only can sharing information help scientist to know all new information which is invented in all around the world, but also it causes to become advanced Country by knowing new research. because this issue helps scientist to use other exploration in their own idea to reach new things faster, so in most time sharing information has most benefit in long term in comparison with keeping them in deep down. For example when corona virus came, scientist in all around the world tried to share their information which they found, this issue helps people to keep themselves in front of ill so the mortality rate went down.
Secondly, using other exploration can help scientist to bring new ideas according others scientist's invention. This point guide scientist to grow new idea which are following others scientist until reach bigger explore. In some cases the scientist who are from different countries are work together base on same ideas and at the end propagate article or release new invention.
Resided, in other side it is important to having trust between scientist when they are released new invention freely. They should not stolen their ideas as own self. By this fact not only is it good to share idea, but also it is more helpful to be advance in during the time.
Finally, in my idea sharing the information is more acceptable in comparison with not sharing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50209966924 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9537684483 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213884581935 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093185915908 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862495841775 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144998847847 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099808957304 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.