Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food, cloths and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them.
People often argue that either make their own decisions for kids can make them independent or affect their decisions can make kids better in the future. I partly agree that kids should make their own choice, however, a suitable hinder is also important for kids growing.
There are several reasons why I believe that making their own decision can cause a positive growth for children. Each kid has their independent hobbies, he likes running and she loves dolls. The hobbies of everyone are different and we should not affect them to change his mind of interest. For example, the kid hopes to get a dinosaur as soon as a family shop at a toy store, the parent should not block his opinion since it is not crucial and it can let children develop or explore their interest. it may be related to the future of the kids’ life or even their occupation.
On the other hand, the reason to affect their will is that some vital choices could not occur any mistakes. kids do not know why they have to obey the rules of society. some kids may not obey the ritual and parents should affect them to change the mind of kids. everyone should not pass through the traffic road when the traffic light is red, for instance, but some kids may not obey it and throughout with a wrong timing, so adults are responsible to affects the natural mind of the kids as well as teach them that green light is the only way to pass through the traffic road. it is necessary to monitor their will and make the correct decision for the kids. Thus, kids should not follow their own decisions as soon as some critical matter.
To sum up, I believe that classify the timing to let kids make their own choices is the most important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48553054662 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18681196873 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498392282958 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7185429063 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225099133009 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097108427525 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750083586563 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171022422027 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376569537045 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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