In this contemporary era, the tourism industry has become the leading sector of national development. Therefore, some people claim that the tourism industry plays a significant role in any country’s economy. While others criticize it for doing harm to the environment. However, I think tourism is beneficial for financial gain and as well as for society.
To begin with, the international tourism is profitable in many ways. Firstly, it contributes huge revenue to the country. Mainly these days tourism companies provide many good facilities to their customer as a result companies take charges from their customers and earn money. For instance, a country like Dubai, is mainly generating income by oil industry apart from that, large number of tourists visits Dubai. Hence, Dubai tourism data revealed that, Dubai local tourist businesses contribute 12.1% in their national GDP. Secondly, nowadays tourism is becoming an industry that creates thousands of jobs for citizens. Consequently, it helps in improving the income of local residents through selling things and providing services to their visitors.
On the other hand, tourism industry have a negative impact on the environment. Specially, modern infrastructure like roads and big hotels that destroyed the natural habitats of animals and spoil the landscape. Because, these kinds of development requires high amount of land. Furthermore, tourism industry also causes pollution. This situation mainly creates in famous tourist places because in that place rush of visitors are higher and it will create noise and water pollution. However, I believe that environmental protection is the part of the tourism development, on how the government allocates the budget on this industry for creating a clean environment.
To conclude, In my view tourism industry can drive a better economy growth in any nation’s. Although, people and government should focus on the environment issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55218855219 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89784583063 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616161616162 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4920968183 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2105263158 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142200471996 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430797870028 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389147468888 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909492448123 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257208029964 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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