Computer has become an important thing having so much influence in our lives. Some people think that it is just machine which is controlled by human, while others believe that computer can make a better quality of life. In my opinion, I really agree that computer can help humanity create the better world for a few reasons.
First of all, computer can make everything faster and more convenient. In the past, we were unable to imagine that we would have a machine that contained a lot of necessary things for daily life such as phone, e-mail, calendar, and so on. When wanting to do something at that time, we had to bring many tools with us, but it is easier for today. For example, smart phone, one kind of computer, contains all of those things inside. It makes us more convenient to do anything because we just touch on these smartphone and then whatever we want will be shown on its screen. It is not only convenience but also speed in processing. The smartphone can execute many programs within a few seconds. All of these cannot happen if we do not have computer.
Working on unwanted jobs can be a responsibility of computer. There are plenty of jobs that humans do not want to do it. Cleaning disposal tubes or working in radiation area is the example of avoided jobs. We can use robots to work all of the unwanted works instead. However, some people oppose that human cannot be replace by robots due to better working's quality, yet this argument is not true at all since robots in the present have more performances than humans already. Therefore, robots can work in many position instead of humans.
At the end of the day, we can see that computer can provide speed and convenience to the society. Human can receive a lot of benefits from the computer if we use them in the right way. Thus, the world can be better in the future if computer is combined with our works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...avoided jobs. We can use robots to work all of the unwanted works instead. However, some p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57058823529 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43552854797 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2764199005 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160316811896 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522371088446 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667844565789 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119194074251 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912928637909 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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