How to build an economic growth in developing countries? In someone’s opinion, the government should be more positive to attract foreign companies to found offices and factories to contribute to the economy, whereas other people think that the government should keep the distance of foreign companies and pay attention to local companies. Personally speaking, I agree with the former idea.
People who are against the former proposal worry about the possibility that the pouring foreign companies will be a threat to local companies. This is because foreign companies are more advanced in production and abundant in fund. Aiming to take the place of local companies in market, they will make more competitive strategies, for those developing and less strong local companies, which leads to the less income to maintain the companies and compete with foreign companies.
However, I believe attracting large foreign companies is beneficial and reasonable in some cases. First of all, there is no doubt that allowing foreign companies set up offices and factories will cause a surge in economic growth. This is because that more employments with good rewards will be brought, and foreign companies will also train employees to be professional and expert. It will be more contributive for developing countries to catch up with developed countries. What’s more, the arrival of foreign companies bridges to the international stand for local companies, which means that they can take the opportunity to improve their production and management since they can learn from excellent foreign examples. Moreover, with the famous but cheap goods provided by foreign companies, for those residence who are more concerned about the price and quality instead of whether a local brand or not, they will feel satisfied and live comfortably, which leads to a more supportive resident attitude to government policies.
In conclusion, it is true that attracting large foreign companies may cause some worries, but I tend to support that it will be more than helpful
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 798, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this residence' or 'those residences'?
Suggestion: this residence; those residences
...oods provided by foreign companies, for those residence who are more concerned about the price ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3653250774 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80049399794 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.9737250776 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.307692308 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212244702562 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870727215796 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518023668049 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144158256324 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577518332266 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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