Some people believe that a county becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures.
Do you agree or disagree???
It goes without saying that we are living in global culture society and it has become important part in every country to progress in social and economical that provide us a lots of benefits in all walk of life. An argument has been put forward that country become interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures . According to me . This statement holds a valid ground .
There are a plethora of reasons why I think nation become better than before when its population belongs to different nationalities . First and foremost point which...
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we are living in global culture society
we are living in a global culture society
it has become important part
it has become an important part
It is rock solid believe that
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
become our friends to belongs other culture
become our friends who belong other cultures
cultural plays indispensable role in our life
cultural plays an indispensable role in our life
Sentence: Because it gives us a lot of opportunity in bussiness and to earn money from other countries then it helps in a country's progess to leaps and bounds.
Error: progess Suggestion: process
Error: bussiness Suggestion: business
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
better to have 4-5 paragraphs:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion
or:
para 1: introduction
para 2: idea one.
para 3: however, idea two
para 4: in my opinion...
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 342 350
No. of Characters: 1627 1500
No. of Different Words: 167 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.3 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.757 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.636 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.292 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.533 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5