It's true that the world is moving fast towards a state where everything will be affected by technology and whether we like it or not artificial intelligence is going to be the next big thing in the technological industry. Although some people consider this to be a blessing for us I strongly believe that we as humans are not yet in a situation where we can rely that much on machines.
Artificial intelligence industries have already becoming a prominent figure in recent times and most of the modern people are very much excited about the new possibilities. One of the main reason is that, it will reduce human effort in various fields and as a result people will be able to do more in lesser time. Calculations and researches that took months in earlier times can now be done within minutes through AI. Another reason for it's acceptance is that, people are always fascinated by anything that is new and exciting. The fact that machines will compete humans in intelligence does create a lot of excitements among people without considering it's future impacts.
Although Artificial intelligence can benefit our day to day life in many ways but the negative impacts are also can not be denied. One major reason to support my view is that, As machines will be able to reduce human efforts, it is quite obvious that it will replace humans in many fields. In many countries people will loose their jobs and the economical condition will suffer. Another alarming consequence is its effect on social life. People have already became technology oriented compromising their social life and with development of AI, this situation will be even worse as they will be interacting with machines more rather than humans.
Simply put, the advancement of Artificial intelligence can affect our life in many positive ways but the consequences of machines replacing humans need serious consideration as the world will never be the same again. In my opinion, some things are better when it's under human control and technologies should be used to assist humans not to replace them.
- Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than h 73
- Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit places? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...y fields. In many countries people will loose their jobs and the economical condition...
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Line 5, column 459, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ect on social life. People have already became technology oriented compromising their ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...f AI, this situation will be even worse as they will be interacting with machines ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to assist humans not to replace them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93982808023 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74278943791 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530085959885 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1913168799 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.142857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239259041819 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850818838257 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496593719965 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152879064115 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212035433836 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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