In the modern era, due to the advancement of technology, the trend of modernization is increasing such as huge masses move from rural areas to urban areas for a better lifestyle which will become a serious issue in human life as well as animal life. Some people ponder that it is necessary for the government to take some steps to protect the environment which is affected by the authority and others oppose to it. Now, I will explain both views and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
There are a plethora of reasons the life of plants and animals destroy regularly. First and foremost, nowadays, the population is increasing day by day and the requirement of individuals is also increasing such as people need food, shelter, clothes etcetera so, most of the people want to live in developed countries for built their home. In addition, the numerous of industries is opened which create a different types of pollution such as noise pollution, water pollution, air pollution etcetera. For example, if the government open an industry in the country then they need more land to built a factory then, they destroy the floura which also adverse the life of fauna. As a result, masses face different types of health problems in their life.
Moreover, some folks deem that it is important for the government to take a initiative for protect the environment. Apart from this, the use of automobiles in the country is rising due to the luxary lifestyle. In these days, most of the people want to use own vehicle rather than private vehicle which creates a various types of people in the individual life. For instance, the rate of accident is increasing rapidly due to the escalating populance as well as more usage of personnel vehicles. According to my opinion. it is the responsibility of individual as well as government to safe our environment which helps people to live a long life and the new generation enjoy the natural resources.
In conclusion, the human activities play a vital role to destroy the natural resources, if people do not think about the world then they will face huge number of problems in their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, as for, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87637362637 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75067232233 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0384009949 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4666666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104550400787 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035828781894 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290264528595 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719371037464 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258258017046 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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