Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them. Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given speacial courses. Discuss those views.
There is an opinion about separating intellectual students from normal students and teach them privately.Adverse to that,some individual believe that there should not be any discrimination between dull and smart students
Undoubtedly, both sides have balance in their views and in this essay we would talk about the merits and challenges this educational method can face and the affects of it on intellectuality of pupils
First of all,i would like to share a report public by university of Harvard which states that a circle of intelligent colleagues can influence the other students in positive manner.breifly it can be considered that group of smart minds have ability to make their buddies stand with their level.An ample evidence suggests that students who help other students and assist them likely to have high chances to pass the exams with extraordinary grades.It gives us a primary reason that why should we educate the students throughly.
On the contrary, there is a clashing opinion of massses who suppose that students with exceptional minds should not be merge with others learners as it could upset their studies.This theory might not be acceptable as there is no evidence suggests that educational environment of brilliant students get affected by studying with their dull colleagues.
To summarize,It can be concluded that the assumption that intelligent students should be lectured apartly is organically a wrong assumption and should be discouraged in schools.While the former opinion is preferable as it would give all students an opportunity to learn from each other irrespective of their educational position.It would assist the whole class to create harmony among them and share their experiences with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42647058824 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06531233415 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 90.0 20.2975951904 443% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 266.672083278 49.4020404114 540% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 492.0 106.682146367 461% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 90.6666666667 20.7667163134 437% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143199323166 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108079235661 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240058752056 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868619696153 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303037379364 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.5 13.0946893788 378% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -28.33 50.2224549098 -56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.4 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.45 8.58950901804 145% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 9.78957915832 644% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.0 10.1190380762 376% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 63.0 10.7795591182 584% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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