Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?
It is believed that AI-powered robots will occupy all the existing jobs. However, in my opinion, even though some jobs are already done by robots, the artificially intelligent machines will not be able to do certain jobs which require special skills and these machines are very expensive.
Some jobs need human involvement although robots are used in many fields. It is difficult to employ robots in certain job sectors like medicine, engineering, education and social service since they lack understanding human feelings, their needs. For instance, there are different intellectually able students in a class who need different ways of explaining the subject. Obviously, a programmed robot teacher will not be able to teach meeting their individual needs as a human teacher will. Therefore, the possibility of robots doing all jobs is equal to zero.
Moreover, AI installed robots are very expensive to buy and their maintenance is also very costly. These are the reasons why employers will still prefer to hire human workers. For example, Dubai authorities are planning to spend millions on robot police personnel. This might be a positive development, however, the government is employing a number of engineers and programmers to maintain them. Furthermore, the skilled operators will be required to keep these machines working, which, in turn, will further increase the maintenance and operation cost and it will make robot-workers more undesirable.
To sum up, robots will never replace humans unless they start to understand human feelings and wants. Also, human workers will still be highly demanded since the cost of operating and maintaining AI robots is remarkably high.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...-workers more undesirable. To sum up, robots will never replace humans unless ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40909090909 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86338583159 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1696627138 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308104313171 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10361354931 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738867340134 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199590132613 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100109252352 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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