Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots.
From the look of things, most jobs will be carried out by robots in the future. while it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be done by robots,it is unlikely that jobs that require human contact will be ostracized. This essay will discuss why all jobs cannot be done by artificially intelligent robots.
Unskilled jobs will be carried out by robots in the future. In the future, robots will be used by humans to carry out menial jobs because they will be programmed to do it perfectly well without an error. In Canada, for example, a profuse amount of robots will be created. These robots are created to carry out menial jobs like store clerks, delivery drivers, housekeeper and so on. In addition, these robots will save more money for the employers. For these reasons, menial jobs will be executed by robotic intelligence because it will be done impeccably with no cost.
There are some human jobs that cannot be replaced because robots will never achieve the capacity to do them. There are some jobs that requires human knowledge which artificial intelligent robots cannot perform because they have been programmed to do jobs in a specific way. Professions like chef, doctor, childcare expert and artist cannot be replaced by robots. In conclusion, human knowledge cannot be obsoleted.
There will be an increment in the use of robots to accomplish some menial task. Unskilled jobs will be carried out by robots but the human knowledge will be required in some sophisticated jobs. In conclusion, human skills will always be needed no matter the increment of robots in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57300537367 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451851851852 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0446465888 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491579905416 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212618916384 0.084324248473 252% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102372022558 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351505472473 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883455921445 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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