Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Other say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
People across the globe are divided on the issue which factor is more crucial for old people that should individuals save funds during their working years or government bestow them facilities to spend better life? Keeping this debate in view it worthwhile to analyze both view points prior to reasonable solutions.
To begin with, who support the former view point putting for their first argument by saying that either old people are unable to do work because of aged or also work could be jeopardy. Moreover, It is indispensible for senior citizen to get financial support from government. In addition, not only after aged all the individuals get laziness but also some of them have creative mind to do work, whose need money to move ahead.
Secondly, who support latter view point putting for their first argument by saying that it is risk to depend upon government due to changing policies. Over and above, people save money during working years to secure their future so that if they ameliorate the life after job. For example, some individuals get life insurance plan from LIC Department which is bestow immense fund after certain time. Since people save money, they make better their future.
Having examined both view point , I would like to assert that both view points have their own merits. In my perspective, to keeping the notion in mind, people should save money for future but government also should care of old people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97107438017 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3246913216 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4651534343 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378309847638 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14624647423 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898010576185 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239180003359 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471482596586 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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