Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some individuals promote the idea of having the governments paying for every student's tuition fee in universities. I agree with this point of view because it encourages people from differrent walks of life take part in this level of education and will assist the developing those countries in every aspect.

Firstly , free-tuition universities give chances for any people to join especially those with low income. There are a lot of people who facinating in studying, reseaching in the university can not do that as they have to make their living. Addtionally, people from country side or whose have parent work in remote places can not afford the expensive cost for university and don't have chances to study evethough they are talent and smart. So that, if the tuition fee of universites are paid by the goverments, people with differrent financial ability can study in universities.

Secondly, because more peple with attends this educational level schools, more people are high-educated and those countries will develop. People who attends university are components of future workforce, future netizens. They will become dotors, engineers, layers,etcs who will make their coutries thriving by the knowledge they get in universities. Beside, people will be more well-behaved in this case. Consequently , the crime rate will decrease.

In conclusion, goverments from all over the world should pay for student's fee in colleges . This will allow people pursue higher education equally regardless their background .Additionally, this helps the goverment to develop their contries in every field.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47773279352 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94066387063 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.068389846 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286830042392 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104025802987 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567893213827 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17488066147 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455122254358 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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