The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table illustrated the underground railway systems statistics in term of opening date, length, and annual passengers for 6 major cities in the world.
While London opened their underground railway earliest and it has the longest railway, tokyo have the biggest amount of passengers in a year.
London first executed underground railway in 1863 with the length of 394 km. Follow by is Paris, this city introduced the 199 km railway system in 1900 which is the sencond longest railway with the length only the half of that in Londom. Tokyo, Washington, Kyoto sequently started their underground railway system in the 20th centery. Los angeles lastest opened their system in 2001. Kyoto have the shortest underground railway which is only 11km.
While Tokyo is the third city opened this underground system with the third longest length, there is the lagest number of people using this to travel which is 1927 millions per year. The second biggest yearly passenger belongs to Paris. Following are London and Washington with 775 millions and 144 millions people per year respectively. It’s obivious the number of annual underground railway passenger in Washington is only equal one fiffth of that in London. There is fewest number of people used this transport system in Los Angeles and Kyoto, which is only equal 5% of the biggest number.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (tokyo) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t and it has the longest railway, tokyo have the biggest amount of passengers in a y...
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Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'sencond the longest'.
Suggestion: sencond the longest
... km railway system in 1900 which is the sencond longest railway with the length only the half o...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...test opened their system in 2001. Kyoto have the shortest underground railway which ...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Kyoto) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...test opened their system in 2001. Kyoto have the shortest underground railway which ...
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Line 4, column 467, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the fewest'.
Suggestion: is the fewest
...ual one fiffth of that in London. There is fewest number of people used this transport sy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11818181818 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48497967133 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6194400088 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8333333333 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237129929417 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105382914543 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069466100582 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180046646198 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671195059623 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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