Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that only challenging hobbies can make people feel satisfactory and attract them to continue doing. In my opinion, interesting hobbies do not have to be difficult because attraction depends on people’s different needs.
On the one hand, some people think activities that challenge them make them excited and have a roller coaster feeling. They can gain a sense of fulfillment when they master in a difficult hobby because it is similar as learning a skill. For example, people enjoy doing scuba diving even though it might be fatal underwater if they are not careful enough. When an activity is ready for everyone to do without requiring hard working or professional training (uncountable), those who want to have a unique experience would feel bored. Easy hobbies are not attracting to keep them doing and people may give up after a very short period of time.
On the other hand, some activities can be pleasurable for various reasons and do have to be difficult at all. First of all, more and more people fostering hobbies for a relaxing purpose which they can refresh themselves and escape from the increasingly stressful life. Taking reading books as an example, most people read fictions and novels in their free time because their brain can take a rest and is no need to analyse the text when they read those books. Also, some people have hobbies for health, and they would be happy if they can keep fit by doing their hobbies. For instance, Yoga is a very popular hobby for people at all age due to the mental and physical pleasure it brings with.
In conclusion, people gain happiness from different things so as from hobbies. All the activities can be enjoyable no matter they are extremely challenging or no need to use your brain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...d people may give up after a very short period of time. On the other hand, some activities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82838283828 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55217745794 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.550349367 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272971254189 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110541008427 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764533084052 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184873637277 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320921738327 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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