Some people believe that for a hobby to be enjoyable it should be hard to acquire or learn. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since hobbies play a role in improving the quality of life, having enjoyable activities is significant in people's lives. In this regard, there is an opinion that hobbies should be challenging to learn to make them entertaining. I disagree with this idea because of its negative impacts on their learning and health.
To begin with, there are several reasons why I am not in favor of having difficult pursuits. Primarily, if people try challenging activities, people would more likely lose motivation, which would eventually lead them to give up quickly. This is because they may not feel excitement while learning some skills which require a higher level of knowledge and capabilities. For instance, in a recent survey in South Korea, it turned out that most people have a tendency to find more joy from activities that allow them to easily access each level of skills, thereby, gaining a strong sense of achievement.
Secondly, demanding hobbies could be detrimental to people's physical and mental health. Obviously, people could easily get stressed by virtue of its difficult skills that they cannot attain, which could result in lower self-esteem and life satisfaction. More importantly, the reason people take part in activities as hobbies is that they may want to find joy to relieve stress from work. If they feel frustrated and they are stressed even during their leisure time, this would definitely bring about stress-related illness such as headache and anxiety. Therefore, hobbies should be easy to learn for people's healthy life.
To surmise, although some believe that leisure activities should be harsh for its entertainment, I oppose this because this would adversely influence people's quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'learning'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: learning
...nion that hobbies should be challenging to learn to make them entertaining. I disagree w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...easy to learn for peoples healthy life. To surmise, although some believe that l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sely influence peoples quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28363636364 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76806821681 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2787852699 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304124509489 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120526509321 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969764460105 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208808134477 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744088860731 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.