Some people believe that increasing text on various industries will reduce pollution whereas other believe that they are better alternative ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, excessive pollution has become a major issue for survival of human beings to alleviate this massive problem, few masses opinion that incline in industrial taxes would help to reduce pollution. However, some opponent ponder that this issue is easily tackle by alternative ways. This essay intents to discuss about its both views and own opinion.
To commence with, increase in taxation system of industrial communities, lead to hugedent in daily pollution growth. To elaborate it, if the authority of any nation made more and more charges on firms on the behave of working hours, so that the manufacturing companies decrease their productivity to save their annual revenue. For instance, previous days the administration of USA made new tax laws on their industrial society to reduce pollution rate of America, which act as a blessings to tackle the issue of pollution. Hence, the growth of taxes on manufacturing companies decrease the production of pollution and provide optimistic outcomes for long term basis.
However, high charges on production industries is superior solution but firms are not only responsible for pollution, their are several alternatives which responsible for pollution. First and foremost, plastic garbage play big role to create pollution. To epitome, near about 30% of pollution growth is climb owing to plastic litter because plastic is a nonbiodegradable product which leave bad impact on fertility of soil. Therefore, government should have to ban plastic material and promote to biodegradable products. Moreover, the individuals should have responsibility to use public transportation in order to decrease air pollution which emitted through over use of private vehicles thus, the pollution face highly decline in their growth.
To conclude, with the help of it, the government not only control to growth of pollution but also generate handsome amount of money to control pollution controlling projects. In my opinion, increase in taxation system is superior way to control pollution but their other factors also crucial to handle this problem.
- Some people believe that increasing text on various industries will reduce pollution whereas other believe that they are better alternative ways Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that increasing text on various industries will reduce pollution whereas other believe that they are better alternative ways Discuss both views and give your opinion 88
- Some people believe that increasing text on various industries will reduce pollution whereas other believe that they are better alternative ways Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47678018576 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94637637128 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575851393189 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1462327674 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149821062962 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559359843966 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469653289944 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971456352971 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428129954115 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.