Some people believe individuals are more important in taking care of environment, others thinks government should be major responsible to it. Discuss and give your opinion.

It’s inevitable that due to the pressure of overconsumption, population and technology, the biophysical environment is being degraded, sometimes permanently. But, it needs to always be taken into consideration that since our planet and its environment as the legacy of the next generation are irreplaceable, every practical measure for the benefit of both the environment and humans cannot be neglected. Therefore, not only environment protection should be among the highest priorities of governments, but protection actions be supposed to be taken at different levels of individuals as well.

Nowadays, the environmental problems at macro level such as global warming, draught, deforestation, extinction, etc are beyond borders and too big for individual countries to solve. So, we have reached the stage where we need cooperation on an international level to protect the environment. On the other hand, the role of governors and politicians in dealing with environmental challenges through various measures such as making new policies, implementing better laws which could avoid destruction of surrounding and allocating necessary funds are indisputable.

The question of whether and to what extend the individuals can play any role in protecting the environment, is a controversial issue. In fact, as all are living in the same world, everyone has a responsibility to save the planet they inhabit. In fact, by taking up some decent habits including the usage of renewable materials, reducing waste and conserving energy, individual efforts can contribute a lot to address the pressing environment problems.

Thus, it is clear that legislators have a certain role in the protection of nature but it is not limited to just them. It is a responsibility that relies on everyone’s shoulder. Everybody must come forward and do their bit to save the environment before it is getting too late.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...ng necessary funds are indisputable. The question of whether and to what extend the individuals can ...
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Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ress the pressing environment problems. Thus, it is clear that legislators have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in fact, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1617.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51877133106 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40597918993 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634812286689 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3310312636 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148399177766 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468561906406 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310928316136 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754731995649 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352061375032 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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