Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As old adages goes," old people have not work, they have to stay with their family and spend time but the contentious issue is about the people have to work at age of 65 or not. people espouse the nation that the old age people have work after age of 65. I opine that the individuals does not have to work at age of 65 as it age of spending time with family. the essay will scrutinize the aspects of the quandary in ensuring paragraph.
To begin with, the people believe over working at age of 65 contribute more income to the family and because they think to work. Furthermore the old age people have more experience for the work and they have ability for doing hard work. For example, the report of industrial world exhibits that 45% of population in indutry work at age of over 65.
Secondly, I vehemently believe that the more income does not make a family happy because they have saved money from long time. Similarly these is the age when they have to spend time with their future generation while they are doing hard work at old age period. To exemplify, A survey of 2019 says 33% leave there jobs at age of 60 so that they spend these time with family.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that the over age of 65 we should not have to work.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1110.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40476190476 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36117446894 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8379957864 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.909090909 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36363636364 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227218105937 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116357614128 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734378594367 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163622657143 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709188477605 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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