Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
When facing to a bad situation, some people argue that accepting it is best while others believe that trying and improving is a better idea. In my opinion, different situations have different solutions.
As my knowledge, accepting a struggling one means following to the flow and waiting for the lucky comes. This can make people more realistic and escape from positive thinkings. Instead of standing up and going to find the solution, they just only need to self-regulate their emotions and force themselves get used to the situation. For example, workers get an unsatisfactory job. By accepting the situation, he or she just keeps doing it to get a stable living while changing his jobs needs a hot of courage and risks.
On the other hand, this also has negative effects. On the same content of accepting the job that people have no interest in, the worker can easily falter and feel boring, which means walking in spot. As a result, in the future, these decisions will lead to the regret on the rest of their lives. Meanwhile, people who are brave to pursue their passion have to get through problems and difficulties on the way of following their dreams and they are not easily defeated. Hence, a suitable job and chance to have growth potential will be replacing uninteresting and repetitive things. Moreover, this is also result performing their capacity, standard of living and spiritual life.
All in all, both arguments are correct in differernt sides. All people need to do is analyzing them and finding the most suitable solution to solve the problem.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situaion such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations discuss bith views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'resulted'.
Suggestion: resulted
...petitive things. Moreover, this is also result performing their capacity, standard of ...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...suitable solution to solve the problem. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9320754717 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67746514551 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0460696557 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188226689896 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589533041855 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794188789155 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127340773489 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120587740958 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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