In this day and age, we are living in a world where the way to tackle a bad circumstance is a heated topic and often discussed.
While some may think people should accept a bad situation, others believe that trying to improve such situations would be a preferable option.
This essay will look at both standpoints and explain the reasons behind my opinion.
It is true that in some circumstances, people have a tendency to go with the flow because they think that everything happens for a reason and they will learn something new along the journey. For example, some global companies from Japan, Korea, or Singapore in Vietnam have a rigid principle about overtime, compensations, and benefits. It makes employees feel unsatisfied and be under a lot of pressure during working hours. However, instead of resignation, they still try to accept the rules because they believe that working under pressure will be a motivation for them to improve their skill and responsibility for working.
On the other hand, others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. The argument that in favor of this view is that some psychologists figured out that terrible situations can lead to mental problems. Many exemplify this statement. Stress or depressive disorder was triggered by financial burdens. So, some people have tried to enhance this situation by finding part-time jobs besides the main job.
In conclusion, I am not against the fact that accepting a bad situation could be a good solution for someone, but there are also many benefits from trying and improving such situations.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: dacphat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hand, others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. The argument t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02264150943 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79483325364 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7052852785 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304061887975 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101410263039 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109872635004 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155262733356 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116693285572 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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