Some people think that accepting a bad situation such as a bad job or lack of cash is the best way to cover. However, trying to improve such situations is a better idea for others. Although acceptance is a good start for bad situations, in my opinion, people should use the maximum of their potential and be all in those situations.
On the one hand, people cannot change everything because their capabilities are limited. Moreover, a person is not the only one responsible for everything in their life which has several factors. Therefore, people should not undertake too much load in bad situations. Sometimes, people cannot change this immediately. Furthermore, always good things come after bad things. So, it is good to accept and wait instead of fighting with that situation. Acceptance improves understating of people and helps people to learn new things from the situation.
On the other hand, a human being starts their life by trying. He tries to walk, he tries to speak. One of the first things we learn is trying. Therefore, examination and investigation are crucial in any kind of condition. What people should know is that trying does not guarantee you will be successful however, it guarantees you will learn something very critical from your unsuccessful trials. Furthermore, sometimes you should think there is no chance or option except for trying. For example, countries fight for their independence instead of accepting it.
To conclude, some people tend to accept bad circumstances because they do not want to deal with too much stress. They believe everything has an end. However, people can reach their best by experimenting with new subjects because hard times create a winner and successful people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, except for, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1161971831 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82093681021 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1143669472 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.65 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245925454455 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722665925236 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872737841105 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160699543537 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114601203287 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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