Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people belive that accepting a bad situation is good, such as an un satisfactory job or lack of money. While others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. In this essay, I am going to discuss both of these point of views, and give a reason why i agree with the second opinion.
To begin with, having a bad situation give us chance to figure out our potentiality, it makes us to try our best in order to find a way to solve a problem. For example, when a person is facing the shortage of money, they need to not only work harder but also learn to invest. In addition, If a person is having an unsaticfactory job, perhaps they did not want to, that may because of their financial contions, so they need to do those jobs to earn a living. Doing unsatisfactory job also give people experiences so that they can use it for applying another jobs, and it going to be much easier.
Howerver, there are many people who belive that it is better to try and improve such situation. Firstly, the cost of suff are much more expensive than it used to be, such as: house price, water, electicity,... this thing make people harder to buy essential commodities, many people are living under the living standar even though they work more than 60 hours per weak and not even have a day break. Secondly, the substandard job can cost many proplems to people. For example, working for a long time under the high temperature, or lack of protective gears,....can lead to many occupational accidents. With these reasons, it is undersandable why many people are struggling for a better job and a better working situation.
In conclusion, working plays an very important part of our lifes, when it takes more than 3/5 of each lifes just for working. So for me to say, every people in the world deserve a better job with a higher paid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50598802395 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62262631957 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.592870171 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305245032981 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10858880509 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10349310647 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201750092106 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156277462127 0.056905535591 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.