Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
During our lifetime, we humans often come across difficult challenges like disapppointing career, lack of financial resources and others. So what should we do in such situations. Most individuals share the opinion that one should attempt to get out of such situations, however there are some who think we should simply acknowledge the circumstance and do nothing about it. I tend to completely disagree with the later belief and I strongly believe that every human being should make an effort to get out of his/her misery.
In my opinion, if an individual doesn't endeavour to get out of sufferings, then they would fall into depression. this wouldn't only result in his/her unhappiness, but it would also harm the people around them. For example, studies have shown that unhappy employees gets easily angry and frustrated and often gets into fights with other people around them, like family and friends. Consequently this would create a sorrowful environment around them which could have been avoided if they hand't simply given up on the challenge and accepted their destiny.
On the other hand, some people think that we shouldn't try to solve these challenges because if we do, then we woul simply get stuck in an never ending rat race. For instance, once a professional works hard to earn his dream promotion and gets it, the next day he'd simply aim for another position and make it his dream, in turn getting stuck in a never ending cycle.
In conclusion, although some individuals believe that we should simple accept our faith and do nothing to avoid getting stuck in the rat race, I strongly believe that every person should try their best to overcome and challenges they might face in their life. personally, I think this would result in an happy and fulfilling life not only for them, but also for their loved ones.
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- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n they would fall into depression. this wouldnt only result in his/her unhappiness, but...
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...her unhappiness, but it would also harm the people around them. For example, studies have shown that u...
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...e around them, like family and friends. Consequently this would create a sorrowful environme...
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...e other hand, some people think that we shouldnt try to solve these challenges because i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94516129032 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52860636638 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577419354839 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2219589588 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112073463828 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452069787656 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033753510506 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708370447549 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118698613236 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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