Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations
Dealing with hard situation in life seem to be best option for some individual while others believe that everyone must shows effort to get through of undesirable life situation like unsatisfying job.I strongly agree with later perspective. In the following paragraph,I shall explain both point of view.
On the one hand, accepting tough situation in life and deal with it is the only choice which some people could have. For example, some families have only one member as breadwinner and a preson supporting, his or her family is under considerable pressure and it would be dunting task for he or she to quit her or his job and risk to find new job with brilliant pay. Therefore the vital things for preson in such situations is to avoid unpredictable future and support their families. Moreover the situation is likely to get more risky and would bring fear to responsible person in family if there is children to support then there will be more intensive to stay in current job that is already secure.
On the other point of view, individual claim that certain situations can be refined if we make an attempt. Some time quitting from a undesirable job and nothing else to do can work as eustress which would help a preson to achieve better career progression also this lead to giving empowerment to individual to create their happiness and do what they want to do not what they have to do which would increase the job satisfaction in which everyone could gain benefit including employee and employers. As results the rate of productivity would grow in companies. In addition, when a person trying to get desirable job he or she must master new skills to build her or his resume therefore, such effort will bring enormous benefits to personal and social life of people.
In conclusion, seeking solutions to come out of bad situation in life is not always easy but people taking, responsibility for their happiness will find way out of harsh life situation. I believe that people must give themselves chance to fight with negativity and try to find something better for their satisfication.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-03-09 | MinyiChu | 61 | view |
| 2024-01-23 | hau le | 78 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 56 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 61 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 56 | view |
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- The pie charts indicate changes in the proportions of energy produced in a country from 1983 to 2003
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement 78
- The most important priority for any government is to provide its people with housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 69
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...ing with hard situation in life seem to be best option for some individual while others...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...le life situation like unsatisfying job.I strongly agree with later perspective. ...
^
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... perspective. In the following paragraph,I shall explain both point of view. On t...
^^
Line 2, column 324, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risk finding'.
Suggestion: risk finding
...or he or she to quit her or his job and risk to find new job with brilliant pay. Therefore t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...isk to find new job with brilliant pay. Therefore the vital things for preson in such sit...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...able future and support their families. Moreover the situation is likely to get more ris...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 590, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are children'?
Suggestion: there are children
...fear to responsible person in family if there is children to support then there will be more inte...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ake an attempt. Some time quitting from a undesirable job and nothing else to do ...
^
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...job satisfaction in which everyone could gain benefit including employee and empl...
^^
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nefit including employee and employers. As results the rate of productivity would ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84916201117 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71245015611 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54748603352 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5791167372 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244572498322 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863936814384 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543545975234 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146165560249 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155534416971 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.