Cam13test1task2
It is said that being a non_native speaker in an exotic country can lead to extreme difficulties in a society. I strongly agree with the statement because of some main reason.
Firstly, communication is a crucial aspect of people's need over definition of which, there is no doubt, , language is the most powerful tool for communicating. Speaking a country language would help people to communication with local dwellers and expand their social life. The experts argue that:poor communication affect individual psychological well_being and induce substantial depression, anxiety and stress for example, a person, living in a new nation, when attending a party is less likely to experience joyful moments. As result, they could not completely understand what others talks about , so they failed to participate in their discussion.Hence, speaking a local language plays a vital role in socializing.
Secondly,it is confirmed that speaking a foreign language Hasan essential effect on everyday life. Foreigner do not speaking the native language may find it extremely difficult to perform daily task or may be accused for illegal action just because they don't know native language.For instance, in driving and road they may can't read what it is written on the driving sing therefore,they would ignore it and they may be cutting commiting a crime by police. So it is essential for an immigrant to learn the dialect of their destination country to live easily and do their work in the best way.
In conclusion, living in a foreign country without fluency in the native language can cause significant problems in both day_to_day and social context.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... definition of which, there is no doubt, , language is the most powerful tool for ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etely understand what others talks about , so they failed to participate in their ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...iled to participate in their discussion.Hence, speaking a local language plays a vita...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...a vital role in socializing. Secondly,it is confirmed that speaking a foreign la...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...speaking the native language may find it extremely difficult to perform daily tas...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ed for illegal action just because they dont know native language.For instance, in d...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... because they dont know native language.For instance, in driving and road they may ...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... instance, in driving and road they may cant read what it is written on the driving ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...is written on the driving sing therefore,they would ignore it and they may be cutting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29389312977 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07207711952 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7924201867 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.7 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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