Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, inadequate employment and lacking of money are now considered two factors that influence mostly in individual well-being. As a result, people choose two different ways to react those circumstances, while numerous people think that acceptance those situations is the appropriate choice, others believe regulation is the perfect answer to the math.
On the one hand, no doubt that undergoing difficulties is not unpleasant for everyone and that might be lead to enhancing the circumstances. Firstly, the process of upgrading complex problems which may influence our self-learning. In others word, improving issues in employment will boost self-learning and similarly, promotions will raise and higher salary is the upshot. Secondly, attempt to stand right at the beginning sometimes doesn’t rely on people because of their burdens are hang above their heads. Due to the fact that they need money to fulfill their bills, they are going to be diligent worker for the rest of their lives whether they do not seek opportunities to accommodate the conditions.
On the other hand, there is another way to tackle troubles in awful cases, which is acceptance. Initially, whether you are well-able in life or not, there are always some incidents that you could not have sufficient capability to undertaking. Life is full of plentiful surprises, somewhat they are inevitable and unchangeable, thus, nothing is considered the best as opposed to smiling and patience till those adversities walk through. For instance, in some field alike accountant, becoming wealthy might be hopeless apart from obtaining lobby.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the latter notion while accepting the former could right in some extent. Improving hardships may be far better, nevertheless, considering to calm and undertake the best in another realms could be extremely brilliant in some circumstances.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-03-09 | MinyiChu | 61 | view |
| 2024-01-23 | hau le | 78 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 56 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 61 | view |
| 2023-10-15 | kheradpishe | 56 | view |
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 80
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47945205479 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0172612815 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2339365237 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2307692308 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121803776417 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364756965719 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359384453733 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750381228556 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356592241789 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.