some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that accept a difficult case is better than try to find a way to overcome this problem. in my opinion, I agree with the second opinion for some reasons, such as people can save times to do other jobs, they can feel happy with a stable jobs, and they can have motivation to overcome difficulties in their life.
First, people will have times to do their works effectively. If people do not make effort to do their jobs, they usually waste the time so that they cannot work actively and just want to finish their works without having the best result.
Second, they prepare plan to overtake difficulties so they can gain their dream and have a beautiful life. For instance, there are no dreams without any hindrances, so if they want to overcome it, they need to try to improve this problem and then they will feel satisfy about what they have done that will make them enjoy the life.
Finally, people tend to see benefits in the future, so it is a reason for them to achieve their dream. For example, if people want to make more money to buy smart phone, they will find a job or sell clothes, furniture to have enough money. Therefore, they have motivation, which is smart phone, to do instead of standing still to wait for opportunity, and then I think it is not a best to accept a bad situation, people have to create an effort to tackle this problem.
In conclusion, people have to choice the best way to tackle the issue efficiently, and do not think accept a bad problem is one way they can choice to have a stable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...to find a way to overcome this problem. in my opinion, I agree with the second opi...
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Line 4, column 379, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...opportunity, and then I think it is not a best to accept a bad situation, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43157894737 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30194158417 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.7094348411 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.3 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120571673012 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600937930209 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411006648236 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780762666894 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490874001435 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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