Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss boths views and give your opinion.
People hold different views about arraying inferior scenes,while others oppose that it's better to enhance such status.i am of the opinion that more efforts should be encouraged to ameliorate the current status than dwelling on dissatisfactory circumstances.
Admittedly, individual choices varies, vast majority of people accept their bad situation as what fate brought on them and are unable to drastically change their status, therefore acceptance of this fact will make them feel more satisfied with life. For example, people love in dire economic situations,recent research put the Democratic republic of Congo as the poorest nation due to lack of infrastructure and internal strife in recent years, such Individual living in small village ravaged by war and farmine it would be cruel to suggest that they should find a way to improve their lives instead such people feel they are better off accepting and focusing on their survival and family.these ball games are rare but do exist around the world of various countries.
On the other hand,with conscious and diligent effort,the prevailing unhappy circumstances can be overcome to bring positive development like a breath of fresh air. Furthermore, improving ones situation involves more hard work, acquiring more knowledge and skills to avoid limitations. For instance,it's often seen that most great people like Linda ikeji a Nigerian blogger Rose from the ranks of common man to hold the highest position as Nigerian richest blogger today by dint of her diligent attempt. Moreover helping oneself you can also help others and nations.
To conclude, there are divergent opinion on how to deal with inferior status. In my opinion one should gird up their lives and make every effort to rise higher in life than dwelling on bad situation.which would benefit their nation as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85031608623 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66323024055 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.999090819 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.444444444 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8888888889 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177498553505 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624464105789 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412056585029 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984681031358 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420352575932 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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