Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many experts say that accepting the bad situation of careers like insufficient salary or unsatisfactory job is fine rather than switching the job to improve the condition. This essay will examine the arguments in both favor and against the topic.
To begin with, employee easily welcomes any situation in career by thinking the long term of benefit. For example, people believe a stable career with one employer and good god pension and health insurance in old age, so they accept the unsatisfactory situation sometimes in their career. Moreover, when people work-life with a single company, the higher trust they can gain from the owner and can get more responsibility in work. Likewise, gradual increment in salary, promotion in the company, work as a part of a team with leaders is the expectation of employees in long-term careers. So, they agree to accept the challenging condition in their life.
In contrast, other people argue to stay in the same company with unsatisfaction. However, they often change jobs to further their career and try to learn different skills in life. For instance, people believe that they must need to be flexible workers, so another company may offer a promotion or higher salary. furthermore, the changing job can be challenging and interesting too, and, at the same time, they can develop a wider range of experience and skills as well. This can be beneficial to be an emerging entrepreneur in the future by gaining all experiences.
In conclusion, both conditions and arguments are acceptable as per the situation. While Employees must know the ability and capability, so they can decide whether to stay with the same employer or to move ahead to accept challenges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...y may offer promotion or higher salary. furthermore, changing job can be challenging and in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11272727273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83737977136 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4720328975 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146493971513 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537134684941 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495826790165 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962614391949 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448896033886 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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