Every human go through good and bad circumstances in their lives. Some people are unwavering when they face unwanted situations whereas others strongly believe to try to work on it and mend the issue. This essay will shed some light on both sides of the argument and why the later one is a better choice.
In this day and age having a job is a mandatory to pay bills. Even though, many individuals are not satisfied with their work, they still stick to it as it is a constant means and provide financial support. Many fresh graduates who can not find a job of their own major, often choose a service sector job, which is comparatively easy to get into, rather than going for higher studies. They usually ended up in a place that they don't want to be which causes dissatisfaction. Another reason being, many people are the sole member of their family who provide their livelihood, to keep the family running they carry on with their job irrespective of own liking.
On the other side, many argued that the best way to tackle a bad circumstance is to try to understand the underlying cause and find a possible solution to improve the situation. Instead of being contained with their unsatisfactory job, they should look for something which they enjoy doing. Sometimes it requires extra effort and fix a goal to achieve the same, but it provides greater rewards. For instance, if someone wants to go to managerial role, they can attend evening MBA courses and will be able to get into.
In conclusion, people can sustain by yielding to a disappointing conditions, I opine that instead of accepting the fate people should do extra effort to improve the situation in their favor.
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 89
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y usually ended up in a place that they dont want to be which causes dissatisfaction...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
... sustain by yielding to a disappointing conditions, I opine that instead of accepting the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72789115646 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6426710902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5721802653 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143539563198 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051751366508 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542951594787 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981577789252 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404822113816 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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