Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A majority of people think that acceptance behaviour of difficulties, including unexpected job or miserable living conditions, is better; while the other groups with opposite viewpoint they should make great effort to overcome obstacles and qualify their lives. From my perspective, I strongly believe that ambition to develop ourselves to reach higher achievements have bigger contributions to our society.
On the one hand, many people satisfy with their current bad status although they have never had desire for it when they were younger. This can stem from the fear of failure and new challenges since they do not want to change their constant lives. These people have a tendency to protect themselves in traditional things and spend most of their spare time on their private hobbies and extended families. Additionally, this type of people usually have hugely financial burdens on their shoulders, such as bank debt or monthly expenditure on children. As a result, they find it difficult to pursue their dreams.
On the other hand, It is needless to say that there is a great number of optimistic individuals who have been continuing expand their abilities and never give up. They know that the sky is the limit; therefore, their seamless attempt can enhance their lives in higher quality levels and bring not only them, but also their loving families happiness. I must admit that this type of individuals has big ambition about career path as well as income. To them, if their current job cannot give them new experience and higher promotion or salary, they will not hesitate to leave those companies.
In conclusion, although many people have acceptable attitude toward their current lives, there are still other people believe that they can change obstacles into strength and with their effort, they can overcome any tough challenges.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20401337793 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6105087602 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9535304667 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0937174739564 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369057180906 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319332846541 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673825002606 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203013741719 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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