Each and every individuals have their own way to handle any situation. It is often thought by some individuals that to accept a dreadful situation is better such as an unsatisfactory job or scarcity of money. However, others opine that bad situations are improved by taking some steps. I will discuss both views as well my opnion in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, the vast majority of individuals are unable to drastically change their situation and acceptance of this fact will make them more satisfied with their lives. The best example would be those people who living in a dire economic conditions. Moreover, individuals make their mentality that they never tackle with such circumstances. In this way, masses loose their confidence to accept any new challenges in life. Furthermore, the responsibilities of families always pressurize humans to do a terrible job which makes the job more boring and discourage the individuals to perform better
On the other hand, change is a part of the life and is always required for the progress of mankind. It is very valuable for individuals to alter their bad situations which is very fruitful to learn something new from their own incidents. Firstly, individuals can understand the value of hardwork and doing more efforts to solve any issue. Mostly countries are becoming more popular because of doing hadwork. Some relevant examples of this are the post-war situation of nations like Germany, Japan and South Korea. All of those countries were devastated by war to greater and lesser degrees yet they are all currently economic powerhouses.
Secondly, if individuals think more positive and ameliorate any sticky situation in a simple way then they can make their good image in the business which is very helpful to getting the promotion easily. It escalates not only the payscale of people but also brings more happiness in the family. Thirdly, individuals almost gain something new from their own circumstances which changes the behaviour and thinking way of individuals.
In my opinion, individuals should have more curiosity to accept any new challenges in life which is very fruitful to make life better and secure. Also, they can bring positive attitude towards any issue which makes the life interested and more joyful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...se people who living in a dire economic conditions. Moreover, individuals make their menta...
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Line 3, column 368, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...such circumstances. In this way, masses loose their confidence to accept any new chal...
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Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a simple way" with adverb for "simple"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ive and ameliorate any sticky situation in a simple way then they can make their good image in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16621983914 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82288953065 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536193029491 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.55294726 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.421052632 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151970930583 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539544280524 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670994725527 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103645945465 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111856968496 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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