Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
It is obvious that some unfortunate circumstances, such as disappointing jobs or miserable living conditions, are inevitable in many people’s lives. While I understand that change can be full of risks, and therefore many choose to accept them, I personally believe that we should strive to improve our lives regardless of the outcome so that we can live life to the fullest.
On the one hand, a host of people have a tendency towards acceptance behavior on account of the fear that changes can worsen the situation. In order to better their living standard, one would definitely have to put a great deal of effort or even sacrifice their current job to seek new opportunities. However, this could result in more hardships, especially for those who play a role as a breadwinner of the family. In fact, many employees decided to quit their jobs in the hope of higher-paid position, but then they ended up becoming unemployed for a period of time, creating more financial burdens to the whole family. Clearly, striving for changes might bring nothing but more financial distress.
Nonetheless, I am of the opinion that only through overcoming hardships that people can get the most out of every precious moment of life. Those who dare to face adversity will become more resilient and determined, helping them become a better person over time. A prime example is Nicholas James Vujicic, who is a renowned motivational speaker born with tetra-amelia syndrome. Throughout his early life, he struggled not only with the typical challenges of school and adolescence, such as bullying and low self-esteem, but he also struggled with extreme depression, loneliness, and anxiety. However, instead of letting his disability deter his life, he took it as a challenge, using it to change his life as well as other millions of lives.
In conclusion, while changes can be risky at times, I believe that they bring more benefits to the betterment of people’s lives.
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- The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. 67
- The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population, which is causing problems not only for poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialised and developed nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at le 73
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- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English in 2000 and 2010 74
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that we can live life to the fullest. On the one hand, a host of people have a...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...they ended up becoming unemployed for a period of time, creating more financial burdens to the...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the betterment of people's lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08024691358 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9394903583 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608024691358 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9870812379 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136016207027 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447631950428 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444778013535 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0843921351557 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324762254751 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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