Some people believe that it is better to live and work in vertical cities. Others, however, think that horizontal cities are better for living and working. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that these days, the population is increasing significantly leading to the high demand for accommodation. While it is argued that living in skyscrapers are more convenient for inhabitants, I still believe that freedom and safety are main benefits, which bring better life for people living in wider areas than that in vertical cities.
Settling life down in high buildings can bring merits for our society such as land saving and ability of adapting over-population. Firstly, when people build more skyscrapers for living, they can spend wider lands for construct facilities such as companies, factories or schools. These constructions not only give them good conditions to grow economy, but also improve educational system for children. Secondly, It is undeniable that the number of inhabitants in the world increases dramatically. Therefore, forming vertical cities is the good ways for them to adapt to over-population. This is because there will be not enough accommodations for people one day if the population is overcrowded.
Meanwhile, protecting own freedom and living in safety are advantages result in choices to live in wider areas. When citizens have houses in wider areas, they can maintain the distance with other families. In other word, they can do everything they want in freedom without being disturbed or annoyed. In some cases, moreover, they can build or decorate their own houses in favorite styles. In addition, horizontal cities can bring people sense of safe. It is known that our environment is damaged significantly and temperature increases shapely, which can make fires occur in some living areas. Therefore, citizens can quickly escape from fires and save their lives in condition of living in wider areas.
In conclusion, having more land for economy and education and quickly getting used to over - population are reasons people want to live in skyscrapers, while other people prefer to settling down in wider areas. In my opinion, I think horizontal cities are better places for people to live due to safety and protection of freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te their own houses in favorite styles. In addition, horizontal cities can bring p...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'settle'?
Suggestion: settle
...yscrapers, while other people prefer to settling down in wider areas. In my opinion, I t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27710843373 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91019656016 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53313253012 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2042763259 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.058823529 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2352941176 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272569013714 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921315252683 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892888578394 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187365324502 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718961714438 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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