Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children’s time is better spent on more academic subjects.
It is believe that Physical Education classes are must be held in school for students at all ages, while others argue that this subjects should be removed from school in order to help students have more time to focus on academic subjects. In my opinion, including Physical Education classes at school is still hold an important key in students’ life.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why students should study Physical Education classes in school. Firstly, children nowadays spend too much of their time to play games on their computers or mobile phones. Thus, this leads to a numerous children’s obesity at a very young ages. Secondly, some students are not academically minded, so this would probably an opportunity for students to take part in on other avenues and find out what they want to do in life. Lastly, as students spend the whole day at school, it is better to have a few hours to exercise, which helps them remembering knowledge better and also releasing stress. As a result, leaners could get good grades in their long-term study.
In spite of these arguments, some people support the view that academic subjects should be prior subjects of students in school. First of all, studying some important subjects such as scientist, engineering and computer would help children have more high-paying jobs after their graduations. Furthermore, parents are responsible for their children’s healthy lifestyles, not only rely on school. For example, parents could encourage students to do activities after school, or reducing children’s fast food consumption.
In conclusion, while many people hold the view that Physical Education classes are necessary for pupils, there are still some arguments against this view as academic subjects are matter as it provides more chances for students in career ladder. I believe that Physical Education classes play an integral part of education’s system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
It is believe that Physical Education classes are mus...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'held'.
Suggestion: held
...al Education classes at school is still hold an important key in students' life...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'age'?
Suggestion: age
...children's obesity at a very young ages. Secondly, some students are not academ...
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Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to remember' or 'remember'.
Suggestion: to remember; remember
...few hours to exercise, which helps them remembering knowledge better and also releasing str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33766233766 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86528319405 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551948051948 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8508200852 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7857142857 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381018795589 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131305389229 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646282521964 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247627787311 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394469474253 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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