The table below shows the results of a 25-year study on the use of bicycles in Britain by age and gender.
The table illustrates how bicycles is used by British people per year in different age groups over 25 years period.
Overall, it can be seen that male teenagers have the greatest distant travel by bicycles, while the oppose figure for this can be seen in the youngest girl group. Over the years, there is an downward trend in the use of bicycles.
In the first year of the research, male between 11 and 17 years old account for the largest distance of travel by bike, at 226 miles per person annually. In contrast, there is only 18 miles of distance travelled in the baby girl group. Women in the age group of 18-59 and all elderly people have the same distance travel, which is 3 miles higher than the figure for the youngest boy group. Men who are between 18 and 59 age group have a larger in the use of bike for transportation, compared to the female 11-17 age group, which is 71 and 56 miles respectively.
In comparison, the use of bicycles decrease dramatically in all age group in the last year of the survey, except for the male 18-59 age group, which increase 8 miles compared to the first year. Similarly, the distance of all cyclists drop to only 38 miles per year per person in the year 25.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...atest distant travel by bicycles, while the oppose figure for this can be seen in the youn...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...st girl group. Over the years, there is an downward trend in the use of bicycles. ...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... miles of distance travelled in the baby girl group. Women in the age group of 18...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48648648649 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40636684905 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3551316475 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186286589933 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097061391683 0.103423049105 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970534992584 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158486362534 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115562471807 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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