Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acdemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
In this digital era, sharing information plays a dispensible role in every aspects of our life.While there are some vital and too valuable data such as personal information that cannot be published, I firmly believe that we need to share information because it is beneficial for our life.
On the one hand, it is true that personal information cannot be shared.That is because this kind of information including names,social media accounts,credict cards and locations belongs to invididuals and only they, themselves have the right to know it.The consequences if this information goes viral will varies and people can be annoyed by unwanted and endless advertisement or in worse-case scenario, they may become the target of blackmail and terrorism.Therefore, any types of sharing private information without permission may be deemed as illegal in some countries.
On the other hand, there are some advantages of sharing infomation.First, in this modern world, experiments can be conducted in everywhere around the globe and scientists need to summarise the result or simply continute any ongoing research which may contribute to greater discoveries.For instance, thanks to the fact that some labotories share their findings about new types of corona virus such as SARS-COV-2, many labs around the world now join hand to create vaccine against Covid-19 pandemic.This international collaboration is describe as happened in unprecedented speed in the history of creating vaccine.Second, from economic perspective, sharing information helps companies to understand the market of customers'habbits and find new sources of funding which tend to boost their sales and then increase the economic health of a country.Finally, any learners in every parts of the world can have access to an immense source of reference,papper,books, to name but a few thanks to information shared.
In conclusion, although the concren of disseminating personal information online is inevitable, I believe sharing information brings us many great benefits in sicenticfic experiments, economic progress and the academic world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66139240506 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57035380514 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604430379747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 20.2975951904 389% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 307.322611436 49.4020404114 622% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 447.25 106.682146367 419% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.0 20.7667163134 380% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.5 7.06120827912 503% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307018133378 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192156981905 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504193007794 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192156981905 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504193007794 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 44.7 13.0946893788 341% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -25.63 50.2224549098 -51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 21.2 7.44779559118 285% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.5 11.3001002004 323% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.35 8.58950901804 144% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 10.1190380762 332% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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