As we all know that cuisine's play a fundamental role in human health life. Foods generate vitamins in the human body that leads to keep body function actively. Some people think that it is an individual's responsibility to take care of own health, conversely, some people argued that the government should look after their resident's health. However, I think that the individual’s and the government cooperatively need to look forward on this crucial situation.
On the one hand, the perform of an individual people have to take care of their health mandatory because to terminate from manifold hazardous diseases like heart attack cholesterol jaundice, diarrhoea and food poison. For instance, as regard’s with doctors, there must be a health check-up annually in order to keep body active and energetic and it guides you to keep mentally fit simultaneously. Therefore, for this people have to diminish eating meals at the outdoor food places.
On the other hand, the action of the government also concedes considerable to protect and make citizens life vigorous. So, initially, whilst importing cuisine’s product from overseas, there should be strict strict rules and regulation to abort the import of unhealthy food products. At this point, I’m not saying that there should be legally prohibited in every meal sectors. For example, the government must sure the process of regular inspection of the expiry date on the food items all over the food market locations.
To conclude, I strongly believe that there needs to be the authority and awareness program by an individual and the government to cease from miscellaneous unwholesome bacteria from foods so that human body can stay healthy for the long term period.
- In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people belive that this discourages the young from taking part in anay sport themselves.Discuss this view and give your opinion. 73
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 95
- The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 78
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As we all know that cuisines play a fundam...
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Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...tively. Some people think that it is an individuals responsibility to take care of own heal...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...is crucial situation. On the one hand, the perform of an individual people have to take ca...
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Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ally fit simultaneously. Therefore, for this people have to diminish eating meals at...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: strict
... product from overseas, there should be strict strict rules and regulation to abort the impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29602888087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93264365483 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595667870036 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8877434013 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227824686048 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775396148896 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907034682799 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130358332022 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651989416987 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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