Some people believe it's better to study at local universities while others believe it is more beneficial to study overseas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, there has been the tendency for more and more people to go to another country for studying. Some people think there is more beneficial to pursue further education locally, whereas others encourage to do that overseas. This essay will discuss both points of view and I believe that overseas study has more benefits because of its education system and chances after graduating.
It is understandable why some people support studying in their nations. The first rationale is that college tuition in native country is significantly more affordable than that in foreign nations. For example, this tuition in Vietnam is about $300-$1000 per year, compared to yearly fee in American which is about $40000. In other words, it is only wealthy person that has the potential and ability to study abroad. Another reason is that it is more convenience when students experience life in university locally because it is in their homelands that their families and friends live. This makes it easier for them to learn and research.
However, I believe that international study has its advantage which students might not achieve when studying at local universities. First, it is easy to approach progressive education system in foreign country. There are a ton of effective methods to appreciate students’ competence, compared to only paper exam in Vietnam, which result in boring feeling when learning. Second, students graduating from foreign college have more chances to look for a good career in the future. This is probably due to the fact that international qualifications tend to be used for recruiting by native companies more excessively.
In conclusion, while there are reasons to believe that getting an education at local universities is better, I would argue that pursuing higher education overseas is more advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...ation locally, whereas others encourage to do that overseas. This essay will discuss ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32302405498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87431521966 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5638558628 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.266666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305849546485 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920995953123 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879071240971 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189298708715 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696512242802 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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