Some people believe that mature employees are beneficial to a company. Others think that younger employees contribute more and hence are more beneficial to a company. Discuss both views with your own perception.
Many persons believe that experienced persons are more productive to an organisation . Others are of the opposite belief, and believe that youth is more contributing to an enterprise and hence successful in it. This essay will discuss both views and give with a valid opinion to this essay in favor of the first statement.
To set in, some support the fact that , experienced workers are the most reflective elements in an organisation .Because of the quality in work they do . for instance an experienced nurse may give a medicine with less side effects and in a proper way , while a fresher nurse may engage in a medication error while providing medication . Moreover the experienced workforce might do the organisational goals in relative short span of time .
In contrast , others believe that each organisation should benefit more from young and fresh workforce.
as they are more creative in ideas as compared to the conventional thinking of the experienced workforce.such as , a new generation employee can offer more and more new ideas of marketing a product as compared to the experienced workers . In addition youth is more involved and updated with the latest technical advancement which may positively influence the company in achieving the goals fast.
To end with, I strongly believe that both younger generation and experienced workers are beneficial for an organisation , as both experience from the superior and fresh ideas and energy is like inseparable wheels of a car moving if anyone wheel detaches , the car stops moving . so a company needs both the generation for better achievements .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25096525097 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03624835377 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.866117745 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.636363636 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228488992156 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805140116462 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564606845439 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122395019825 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606001909679 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.